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March 9th, 2001, 02:34 PM
#1
Inactive Member
I awake in the darkness
I cannot move
I lie there in the fog
Cold and confused
Noises all around
I can hear you
Shadow on the ground
I can see you
My body aches
I can feel you
My heart breaks
I can't touch you
Tall and dark
Full of pain
I feel my strength
Start to drain
You speak
I can hear you
You move
I can see you
Oh god
I can feel you
Why?
Can't I touch you
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March 9th, 2001, 07:43 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
a little bit of rhythymn an' rhyme that i liked. the beat is nice and coming back to the original "i can .... you" was always good. it didn't make me scream or jump or cry or laugh but it was nice. simple. thanks for posting. keep it up.
___---parch
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March 9th, 2001, 07:44 PM
#3
HB Forum Owner
how do you spell rhythymn?
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September 6th, 2001, 03:37 PM
#4
Inactive Member
started digging through the shit that predated me liked this show i thought i would bring it up and by the way parch its rhythm
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