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March 20th, 2001, 01:04 AM
#1
Inactive Member
Your lips that which I long to taste
And in my sheets can touch
I miss
And your soft skin held tightly
The safety of your arms
I miss
Looking through your eyes into your soul
Seeing you and I together sealed with a kiss
I miss
Your hair running circles in my fingertips
As I place it behind your ears
I miss
Your intoxicating aroma
Lingering on my skin hours later
I miss
You
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March 25th, 2001, 08:15 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
good poem..purposeful, sucked me in,... "your hair running circles in my fingertips"--great line. nice.
___---parch
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March 26th, 2001, 12:09 AM
#3
Inactive Member
wow. Good work. There are mulitple reasons why I like this, but I think the main one is that you caught my feelings perfectly..and...well....aw...speechless sir.
i liked the "I miss" part of the work. really tucked in the feelings and seperated your thoughts....and you ended it wonderfully with the mention of her aroma....once again.......wow.
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October 16th, 2006, 12:22 AM
#4
Inactive Member
CONGRATULATIONS!...and welcome to the world ofAG Gonerhood!
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