Teaching an old dog new tricks

[Trevor Vincent]

Your lips that which I long to taste
And in my sheets can touch
I miss
And your soft skin held tightly
The safety of your arms
I miss
Looking through your eyes into your soul
Seeing you and I together sealed with a kiss
I miss
Your hair running circles in my fingertips
As I place it behind your ears
I miss
Your intoxicating aroma
Lingering on my skin hours later
I miss
You

[parch]

good poem..purposeful, sucked me in,... "your hair running circles in my fingertips"--great line. nice.

___---parch

[machinery]

wow. Good work. There are mulitple reasons why I like this, but I think the main one is that you caught my feelings perfectly..and...well....aw...speechless sir.

i liked the "I miss" part of the work. really tucked in the feelings and seperated your thoughts....and you ended it wonderfully with the mention of her aroma....once again.......wow.

[prasnlrd]

CONGRATULATIONS!...and welcome to the world ofAG Gonerhood!
<font color="red">....mwahahahaaaaaaa....</font>EOYBA honey! <font color="red">....mwahahahahaaaaa...</font> [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]

[img]graemlins/island.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/money.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]graemlins/island.gif[/img]