losing...

[machinery]

Knowing that it will never come again
her presence will never brush
by
her eyes will never connect
to mine
Days of yesterdays fill my dreams,
fill my head,
fill the aisles in my veins,
fill my hands with bloated tears

Because of her, I once wanted...
Because of me, our invincible crashed...

a struck nerve,
that couldn't be mended, or sewn

I won't stretch; I won't bleed the internal
(grasp it has on me)

Pulling my skin
to close it in
I won't shut
it won't stop

She's in me most remarkable
and I can't shake
the truth...
the year we once had...

[machinery]

This isn't the way I wanted it structured, but the hostboard won't let me space the way I want....This is in a way cryptic...and very glitchy, and broken up....like I said...

I'm losing.....

[parch]

great work...every word had a purpose....everything had a reason to be there.. you didn't hide behind any poetic phrases like you sometimes do. you told it straight up but still made it art.
___---parch

[lost to be found]

Hey I really like this one, I can connect to it in many ways, I can switch the roles and play into it. There are inner feelings in each line, that has an underlining meaning. It is good!