rant...

[machinery]

public intellect
public mutiny
through the quiet calm thunder
and soft scratching of pen against paper
true intelligence is written
more stumbles in the voice than in the mind
spoken too fast
with no jazz
all distortion
and no beat or
simply melody
I would rather float in my imageries
and create wonderous works over time than to spark a grand conversation over a ten second statement spoken from a raw tongue. I cannot ramble my correct intelligence. It must be expressed through written text. I think too fast and come with the calmness of a rope ladder.
studder and studder
confused and defeated in my head. I would rather shut up and return to my silence then continue with my embarrasment.

Let your written become ones night prayer.

[ranter]

oh man oh man oh man, how it goes how it goes, yeah this is it man, this is it man, its what im talking about. but your wrong. its not about this or that its about everything man, everything and everyone, its just how it is, yes that rights, its how it is, everything should be like that this and whoa the things we say, listen, talk man write it all, yes

[Truth Alexander]

Good work...........Striving to prove the point that true and pure intelligence is in written form........Cuz anyone can reherse and bullshit their way to give an intelligent speech..........But when you write, that is what comes from you truly inside.......One of the few parts of you that can remain pure.......Of course this may make no sense to most of you, but hey, thats just my view.......The Truth

[parch]

ummm....sorry..not likin this..
its ok
but not really your quality
i'd love to see you write more like this because i love to see new shit but this didn't grab my nuts like the rest
and this...seemed

WAY TOO MUCH like that ryan guy at the knox poetry workshop ...the guy that was so elequoent, and played w/ words like they were strings on a guitar...pluck, pluck, pluck...
actually...he was good
but i didn't like seeing your poetry remind me of his

___---parch