Free

[Trevor Vincent]

Is this about being free from a relationship? I liked this, but it seemed rather self loathing to me. Just a thought. Good work though.

[Zeik Blaine]

The hurt i feel it now
It is so intense
the pain is destroying me
Surrounded by confusion
Desperate for difference
Something new to crave
Suffocated by life
Drowned out by Society

Torned down by the crises around me
Burned by the hate
Shut out
Surrounded by gawking eyes
Mind plagued by questions
plaqued by illusions
Defining myself
too difficult to overcome
Evacuation of life
Easy way out
Depleted of energy
Gone from the world

Finally Im set free
feels much better
easier than life
not feeling their eyes
Not seeing their thoughts
Much happier
Free from the
hate
society
from you
free at last

[ranter]

i got the feeling that you were writing about how people felt about you, and you finally came to a point to where you didnt care, and you were free of thoughts of other people. i liked it. although i felt it was a little too structured.