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March 1st, 2001, 03:50 AM
#1
Inactive Member
I dreamed....
on the floor we rolled,
unclothed,
until you rolled on top of me.
a blanket was wrapped around us,
and I was wrapped in you.
and as you smiled down at me,
I thought:
you look so good
so good
so good
so good.
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March 1st, 2001, 03:59 AM
#2
HB Forum Owner
my favorite that you've posted so far...well done, so simple yet so right...
you bring that feeling alive and share it with us...the readers..for that...thank you
___---parch
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March 1st, 2001, 03:10 PM
#3
Inactive Member
I really enjoy your work, you capture the moment and dance with your words. You capture that moment of awe that is present and say it so well.
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March 1st, 2001, 04:05 PM
#4
Inactive Member
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