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April 4th, 2001, 04:52 AM
#1
Inactive Member
this is really good..u mentioned it all..from one perspective to another *claps*
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April 4th, 2001, 03:14 PM
#2
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What happens if I am alone?
Alone brings its own stages of fear
Alone is the worst feeling
Pain is not close to the worst feeling
Being alone brings pain
Loneliness crashes into me
Like a wave overtaking the shore
Submerged into the pit of darkness
Feeling my depression eat me away
Eating me away from my life
Crouching in a corner
The shadow covers me
I wish to be taken away
Taken away from the world
Society alienates me from everything
Crucially hurt by the word: ALONE
Nobody wants to feel it
Everybody fears it
Many live it
Some die from it
It scares me
Being alone is the darkest room of the house
Walking in it without light
No door, no way out
One way ticket to nowhere
Gone from existence
Away forever
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April 4th, 2001, 04:49 PM
#3
Inactive Member
I really liked this one...I liked the way everything was centered around "alone" and being alone. My favorite part of this was "Nobody wants to feel it/Everybody fears it/Many live it/Some die from it" I just thought these lines were very powerful and really brought the whole thing together.
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