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    Inactive Member tsilo's Avatar
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    this is really good..u mentioned it all..from one perspective to another *claps*

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    What happens if I am alone?
    Alone brings its own stages of fear
    Alone is the worst feeling
    Pain is not close to the worst feeling
    Being alone brings pain
    Loneliness crashes into me
    Like a wave overtaking the shore
    Submerged into the pit of darkness
    Feeling my depression eat me away
    Eating me away from my life
    Crouching in a corner
    The shadow covers me
    I wish to be taken away
    Taken away from the world
    Society alienates me from everything
    Crucially hurt by the word: ALONE
    Nobody wants to feel it
    Everybody fears it
    Many live it
    Some die from it
    It scares me
    Being alone is the darkest room of the house
    Walking in it without light
    No door, no way out
    One way ticket to nowhere
    Gone from existence
    Away forever

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    Inactive Member Trevor Vincent's Avatar
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    I really liked this one...I liked the way everything was centered around "alone" and being alone. My favorite part of this was "Nobody wants to feel it/Everybody fears it/Many live it/Some die from it" I just thought these lines were very powerful and really brought the whole thing together.

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