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    Inactive Member Goku____90's Avatar
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    I can't sleep anymore
    I don't know what for
    this is the closest I've ever been
    I've never been to BOston
    I've never been to Spain
    Never been to FRANCE
    and I'm tired of all this paine
    Its time I made a stance

    life is like a piece of glass that could shatter so fast
    I'm gonna really miss ya man but I got to do what I can

    was i too fat for you
    or did you wish my eyes were blue
    and you really don't know me
    don't know who I want to be
    I'm gonna turn my head and run
    this time I'm finally done

    i'm gonna lose myself tonight
    cried so much i lost my sight
    and i've been thinking its alright
    but i better be polite
    so people won't get mad
    Oh.....I'll make them all so glad

    Joshua Lee Johnson

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    i like this a lot. the third stanza and the second lines of the fourth...are very good.
    "cried so much i lost my sight" is just beautiful. where did the title 'silk' come from??

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    Silk is very soft and if you're careless with it, it will ripe and you will ruin it. To me, life is the same way. Silk and life.
    I'm glad you like.

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    thats very good. ive never heard of someone realizing life with that simile. beautiful.

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