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July 8th, 2001, 07:45 PM
#1
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I can't sleep anymore
I don't know what for
this is the closest I've ever been
I've never been to BOston
I've never been to Spain
Never been to FRANCE
and I'm tired of all this paine
Its time I made a stance
life is like a piece of glass that could shatter so fast
I'm gonna really miss ya man but I got to do what I can
was i too fat for you
or did you wish my eyes were blue
and you really don't know me
don't know who I want to be
I'm gonna turn my head and run
this time I'm finally done
i'm gonna lose myself tonight
cried so much i lost my sight
and i've been thinking its alright
but i better be polite
so people won't get mad
Oh.....I'll make them all so glad
Joshua Lee Johnson
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July 9th, 2001, 04:18 AM
#2
Inactive Member
i like this a lot. the third stanza and the second lines of the fourth...are very good.
"cried so much i lost my sight" is just beautiful. where did the title 'silk' come from??
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July 9th, 2001, 06:28 AM
#3
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Silk is very soft and if you're careless with it, it will ripe and you will ruin it. To me, life is the same way. Silk and life.
I'm glad you like.
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July 11th, 2001, 03:30 PM
#4
Inactive Member
thats very good. ive never heard of someone realizing life with that simile. beautiful.
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