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[Hannibal]

If I could breathe you in for a second,
A moment of your time.
Just a moment you'd be mine and you could see me,
For just what I am.
You'd be able to float through my hollow,
Filling myself with you.
Reaching to the most existant emptieness your eyes have ever taken an opening to.
Your feelings would touch me,
I would open my eyes and be alive,
With you.

[rose]

that is what i needed to read tonight. oh my. that was beautiful, so much so that im close to crying...thank you.

[utopianChaos]

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You never know you're feeling what you're actually feeling until someone points it out to you.

This was absolutely beautiful... as always =O)

[parch]

yeah..
it was nice.

but about never knowing what you're feeling..

i think that you never know what you're feeling because you feel so many things at once..

a person can feel sorrow and happiness at the same time, glee and remorse...envy and joy,... and at the time of those feelings... you have to choose one. you have to stick to one. but later you can go back and remember and realize you were feeling both... but had to side.

i don't know..
just me wandering the mess of words.. i think that's how i see it though.
not trying to start an arguement but i think this is me here.

yeah..

yeah.

[utopianChaos]

I completely agree with your thoughts, too many feelings at once creates a state where you are unsure of how you are feeling. In your terms, this poem set my thoughts/feelings in one direction that i stuck too. Hence granting me the awareness of that one feeling and amplifying it so it is brought in to the spot light of the surface

nice thought.