Peace

[Soiled Soul]

i felt myself wake and was careful not to stir for i could feel Her weight upon my chest- i opened my eyes to an image more beautiful than any work of art made by man or God- She lay with Her head on my chest and Her arms wrapped around me- Her face showing Her trust and the feeling of saftey my warmth provided Her- i lay for hours staring into Her closed eyes and i could forget the hellish heat inside that tent and the rocks digging painfully into my back- afraid to ruin a moment of complete bliss that I would not soon know again- the peace that comes from having an Angel wrap her wings around you and shelter you from yourself

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[machinery]

wow, really different from what I have read...reason being....it has one idea I can follow..in your other works, I got lost in numerous images..and felt like I was high with my eyes closed, well..anyways, it was really nice to see "Her" captialized...seemed you were trying to say something....is this the same chick as in every other writing?



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[Soiled Soul]

thanks, yeah this one is a little more clear most of my stuff isnt prethought its just kinda my thoughts and it always hops around this was an idea i wanted to put words to so its more solid, as far as the Her yes its the same girl also notice that i is not capitlized

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[machinery]

well damnit pk.......i am drunk, i can only catch one thing at a time..fuck!

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[Soiled Soul]

damnit your posting to me and i am three feet away from you...post on the other 4 i would like to hear some comment on those


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[Pixelina]

you really described a moment i know very well...maybe i little turned around from a different perspective...but i love that feeling, and the way you expressed it, especially in "the peace that comes from having an angel wrap her wings around you and shelter you from yourself" that's so cool. and i like how you describe the discomfort but how it just doesn't matter. right from the soul, or shall i say write?

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[parch]

hahah... you guys are slippy and goofy but hey. .. i'm happy you're on the board


really like your work p.

so glad all these new people jumped up on the board. and for all you new guys reading this.. thanks...

aside from all that..

this was alright, with one thing and alll.. but i like the mix images and such machinery may be talking bout..

so if you've got 'em, give me images.