Time

[LiQuiDreaM]

What is time?
And who calculates it?
Who puts limits on it?
It is a river with no banks.
So profound and without definition.
Something everyone has, but doesn't value.
A value of no substition.
It heals wounds without words.
Life is determined by it's second hand.
Death is it's result.
Wasted is it's fault.
As it slowly passes us by, we can catch if we try.
To the blind there is no time, but to the seeing it's hard to find.
We must value time and it's worth.
Something we've had since birth.

LiQuiDDreaM Copyright 2001

[machinery]

good questions at the beginning....but I didn't like how they were just questions..and that's it....put some jazz behind your uncertainity.....

one more thing....was your rhyming at the end totally intentionally? I don't know what it is about me and rhyming that don't mix...I just don't like it.....but hey, it's your work!

[LiQuiDreaM]

Thanks for your tips
umm...i'm not usually a "rhyming person" either...but it just kinda came to me like that. so i don't know...