shadow

[blackaquea]

black cloaks the sky
his presence oblivious to shallow eyes
like a thousand rhymes
he creeped and searched for his identity,
quietly...
a shadow drifting in anonymity
he passed through rocks and trees
and walked along with people
but there never came a clue
how he lives to only be dead
is what keeps haunting you... [img]graemlins/bat.gif[/img]

[SHATOUSHKA]

sounds like lyrics...

or what could be

[blackaquea]

hey! thanks for giving me an idea...
i never really thought that this could
be turned up into a song, but since
you brought it out, i just hope i can create
the right melody for it...can i get some
hint of how to immerse it into a song?

[machinery]

the last three lines leave me uneasy....
i think it's the mention of you...and the second to last line seems to be worded funny...or mabye it's just how i read it...

but i do think you could turn this into a song....
there are no real rules to making a song...lyrics are what you make them...but i just wrote something the other night you can take a look at....i'm the type of guy writes songs that will never be sung....ha..a loser i know...ha

cold like refrigerated pizza
is my uneasiness towards your absence
i'm withering in the whirring roadways
waiting for a glimpse of your green light

but your session has already ended
and i'm just an overdue charge
you're stamped to my heart
but i can't see your lines anymore

leftover love
and it's never the same
leftover love
and you're just a picture frame

leftover love
and it's never the same
leftover love
and i'm left without aim

a page ripped from our novel
without a paragraph's end
i'm wanting a comma
when you only a period

leftover love
and it's never the same
leftover love
and i'm the one to blame

leftover love
and it's never the same
leftover love
and i'm the one to blame

[blackaquea]

that's a great one...i could really relate myself
with that
geez, i almost lost track of this poem, i don't know i guess i forgot to turn it into a song, but here's another one i wrote for a song...
i guess nobody will hear it anyway, but i just want to know what u guys think about the lyrics... [img]graemlins/cat.gif[/img]

I recall you in this distance
Coz when you're near I should control
At least my heart don't feel resistant to know
Walking on against the wind
They force like vampires to my soul
But then you'd breathe on me again
Then I'd float

Don't go...
Don't miss this glittering sign
Let this wall fall
Don't go...
Don't leave my bliss behind
Let this wall fall

We've been threading on a thin line
Though emptiness made me secure
Still it's shaking in disagreement to our waltz
Flailing drunk from incognizance
Does my steps lead to your door?
When you held me in a dance, do you know?