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September 9th, 2002, 02:03 PM
#1
Inactive Member
Walking down the street
over packed, too many people meet
distracted, feet slip
time freezes like a missed heart beat
a moments silence
silent clarity
peacefull sleep &
sleepless dream
Proletarian rule for
My greedy sanity
an endless dream
fullfiling sleep
Darkness comes with
brilliant light
Breathe
A moments clarity &
silence fades
Heart Beats like skipping feet
Frozen times distracts
i have people to meet
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September 11th, 2002, 06:13 AM
#2
HB Forum Owner
wow... socialaus... you be clickin' linkies...
LOL
nice poem... already feel paranoid! [img]confused.gif[/img]
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September 11th, 2002, 06:15 AM
#3
HB Forum Owner
it kinda reminds me of another piece:
midnight in the subway
she's on her way home
she tries hard not to run
but she feels she's not alone
echoes of footsteps
follow close behind
but she dare not turn around...
turn around...
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September 11th, 2002, 10:59 AM
#4
Inactive Member
it kind of reflected that day i wrote it.
it was not meant to a scary piece more like that in one split moment of total silence, serinity there was peace and the urge not to go on but is drawn back to reality with the need to go on.
though now that i have reread it again, i can see the positive, negative aspects of it, conflicting. [img]confused.gif[/img]
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September 12th, 2002, 06:54 PM
#5
HB Forum Owner
thats not a bad thing
(i'm sure you knew that) [img]tongue.gif[/img]
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