The Second Resurrection

[lostmushi]

Sweet changing flies
With wings
Like a butterfly.

Smells like a dreamspell,
Magic turning feelings.

Nudity inside,
Making us
Vulnerable to each other.

Authentic fairy
Picking up
Lost hopes,
Sensible sight.

Born once,
To live a million times.

From what is lost,
Waiting to be found,
Wanting a miracle kiss...

12 ~ 11 ~ '03

[sarafina mable]

Originally posted by Negative Sun:
Sweet changing flies
With wings
Like a butterfly.

Smells like a dreamspell,
Magic turning feelings.

Authentic fairy
Picking up
Lost hopes,
Sensible sight.

Born once,
To live a million times.

From what is lost,
Waiting to be found,
Wanting a miracle kiss...

12 ~ 11 ~ '03

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">i love the language you used!! it kinda rolls off the tongue so smooth but unfamiliar. good job!
with the title i'm assuming this is about resurrection, what i like the most is that it makes me think more on a day to day basis and how every day could be another lifetime--especially when you're waiting to be found,
i'm not sure if that was the intent, but either way i really like the piece

[lostmushi]

this was a good time poem...ahhh, the good old time, i sometimes feel like i'm 70...
i know, i'm weird... [img]tongue.gif[/img]