When Life Starts - Chapter 1

[apenman]

I really enjoyed this story! Very well written. There were some lines that had me thinking, i wish I had said that. Well done!

A. Penman

[catfightlover40]

I really enjoyed this story! Very well written. There were some lines that had me thinking, i wish I had said that. Well done!

A. Penman

I only wish Who's that? would be also published here as that story imho is even better. Stories like this, and that of JB, and Augur, Ragnar0k, Anubisx, you, Shak et al. make me jealous due to my incompetence in writing such conflicts.

[Rivals_Rapture]

I only wish Who's that? would be also published here as that story imho is even better. Stories like this, and that of JB, and Augur, Ragnar0k, Anubisx, you, Shak et al. make me jealous due to my incompetence in writing such conflicts.

I am fairly certain that despite the brief interludes of sexuality in Who is This?, it is far too much a catfight story to be posted here without complaint, and I would bet most writers and readers frequent both this forum and FCF. Still though, and as always, I appreciate so deeply your words and your support, catfightlover40 .

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I really enjoyed this story! Very well written. There were some lines that had me thinking, i wish I had said that. Well done!

A. Penman

The fact that you read the story is compliment enough, but to have a writer as talented and well-known as yourself not only like the piece, but then comment and say such wonderful things about it is certainly cause for celebration. Thank you, Apenman!

[catfightlover40]

I am fairly certain that despite the brief interludes of sexuality in Who is This?, it is far too much a catfight story to be posted here without complaint, and I would bet most writers and readers frequent both this forum and FCF. Still though, and as always, I appreciate so deeply your words and your support, catfightlover40 .

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The fact that you read the story is compliment enough, but to have a writer as talented and well-known as yourself not only like the piece, but then comment and say such wonderful things about it is certainly cause for celebration. Thank you, Apenman!

My Doth the lady protest too much landed on here as it contains one sexfight in the series, as it will also contain a mass brawl and catfights, so hybrids are welcome Plus, and I think I paraphrase XP here, our best interest of welcoming like minded individuals comes from our community being relatively small, especially compared to FCF. Plus, and I don't wish to be presumptuous here, but if you'd post further sexfight stories with the detail and content you give them, you could lift Shak's spirits that is indeed worth it to publish meaningful stories here.

[apenman]

"The fact that you read the story is compliment enough, but to have a writer as talented and well-known as yourself not only like the piece, but then comment and say such wonderful things about it is certainly cause for celebration. Thank you, Apenman!"

Rivals_Rapture,

Thank you so much for your kind words! You made my day!

A. Penman

[clash11]

Another great story but my fav is still Dutch Dominance Denied, the girls getting stuck together is a very hot image.

[Giannis-CB]

Excellent !! Very well written, written by a talented pen !! Very Hot !!

[Rivals_Rapture]

Excellent !! Very well written, written by a talented pen !! Very Hot !!

You know someone's praise is important and sought after when I get messaged on another website telling me not only that you commented on and praised my story, but also how much that praise means. Thank you, Giannis! I am so glad you liked my story, and I hope I am able to make more stories for you to enjoy in the future.