Quote Originally Posted by apenman View Post
Yuri,


“We told each other of our various carnal exploits like we were two hardened soldiers sharing war stories.”


Just one of many lines that made me say to myself “I wish I had written this.”


I’m with my friend Giannis on this. Your creativity has taken a giant leap forward. Your descriptives and your dialogues are colorful enough to paint a picture and make the reader feel, vicariously, in the scene. Really nice, Yuri. Keep it up. You’re only going to get better.


A.Penman


PS: If indeed you are emulating some of my style, by all means go for it! (SMILE)
Thanks a lot, bro and…Guilty. Ashley herself was based heavily on Brandi. Although, Brandi is more upbeat and lovable while Ashley is more arrogant and competitive.