Island Battle 4

[Shindy]

Nikki hit Dana repeatedly, in the chest and face, really knocking the crap out of her. Dana though, would not be subdued and fought back hard. The punches were flying rapidly and connecting with considerable effect when somehow, Jack and I came to our senses, jumped up, and pulled the two women off of each other.

The two women were struggling to get free from us, but we held tight, ending the fight. Nikki's face was flushed and she had a big welt developing under her left eye while Dana had a bloody nose.

"Fucking cunt!" Nikki hissed, "I'm gonna tear you apart...Let us go," Nikki said to Jack, "Let us finish this for real..."

"Bring it on you blonde piece of trash, " retorted Dana. "You're not so tough, you're just dirty..."

Nikki kicked wildly at Dana. Jack held her back and escorted her out of the room, grabbing her clothes. He called back to me that he would call me later.

Dana collapsed into my arms, and began to sob. "H-h-holy shit!" she sobbed, "She was beating the crap out of me..."

"Then why didn't you submit?" I asked.

"What?" she replied, "Did you think I was losing?"

"Didn't you just say that?" I asked.

"No, I just said that she was hurting me, but I thought I was holding my own--I was about to quit."

I was surprised, I really thought Dana was in trouble but apparently she didn't.

I went out and picked up some dinner while Dana took some time in the hot tub. The rest of the night was fairly quiet. I gave Dana a rub down and then we drifted off to sleep...

The End????


NOT!!


I awoke at 12 midnight to an empty bed. I searched the house for Dana and she was no where. I opened the back door and looked around the pool--pitch black. As the wind blew up from the beach I thought I heard voices. The moon shone on the ocean and then I could see them. Two women silhouetted in the dark ocean night, on the beach...

...fighting.

I grabbed a shirt and rushed down to the beach, not sure if I would break this up...

to be continued...

[Ted Mark]

GREAT twist,.. I'm laughing. I wish this move occured to me.

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[MikeJV]

Great fight... and you ALMOST had me upset at the break up... UNTIL I saw the "not" and the restm PLEASE continue. And for the record... my vote is a fatal end and a titless corpse(ripped off) being taken out to sea in a boat and fed to sharks. That titless corpse is Nikki.

MikeJV

[wildger]

After reading you story, I feel that you have grabbed the readers by their balls and can easily twist anyway you like. Way to go, man. [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img]

[unkins]

On pins and needles...cant wait!! luv it. I sense a brutal fight coming on... [img]smile.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img] [img]smile.gif[/img]


Great work so far.

Cheers,
Veronika