hello..........

[Eden Niro]

im thinking bout writing an old fashioned film, set in the 40's / 50's...about a jazz singer who goes round touring different cities singing sinatra/martin style songs....but i need a twist..this story has been done...any ideas for a twist towards the end....please...someone...cmon...cheers

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[miker]

at the end he takes his mask off and it's been Robbie Williams all along ...

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[BuBu]

Ha! Ha! (that laughter is for Miker) erm okay i would firstly decide a)why is he going around singing? b)how do people react to this and then the ending will corrospond otherwise it will have no justification and the audience will be annoyed that there was no through line. Not all films need this but this film sounds like its emotionally driven so it really does. Does this help?

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[Eden Niro]

...robbie williams

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[SoulJacker]

Miker the talker of much poo/shite

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[Mods]

Hows about near the end we find out he hasn't actually been singing, but they've just been playing a record and he's been mime-ing so everyone boos him. He does some singing lessons and comes back and sings properly and everyone loves him.

Happy ending.

Oh, then a bomb goes off.

Cool ending.


Mods

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[Edin's Vampire]

How about he is actually the devil and the singing has just been a soul searching effort?

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[thepreacher_naric]

Here's a idea;
The guy tours different cities and has a daughter with a drug problem that he keeps in contact with over the phone. He left her and her mother ages back because of the need to play music. He needs to know his daughters ok because he still loves her of course but he can't fight the desire to play music. In the end his wife which he has'nt spoken to in a long while, finds him in a city that he's currently touring and walks in a bar which he's having a drink in. She sits down and tells him that their daughter has over-dosed.

Tell me what you think.



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[Eden Niro]

sorry for the delay...yeh, i like that last idea man, its kinda dark, the shit that interests me...maybe then he does one last soppy song for his daughter, you know, real sob story kinda old fashioned shit...nice...cheers

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