static

[dwim]

listened to the radio
until the city fades
away in static.

As long at the air
waves could hold out,
I can hold those urban
memories in my head.
It seems sad to
leave, but when it's
time to move on,
it's time to drive on

like I like my life
changing & unpredictable
& opportunities to see
new faces, new names
something new-
because same things starts
feeling old.

I'm fond of this radio station
it was always on this dial
so I'm listening, seeing faces
that I am leaving behind
crackling in static
crack.... in ...tic
.....ling .. sta...
.......... .. ..tic

[Chilimuffin]

heh... little road poem? I like it. Is the tense change intentional, or just an accidental twist?

[Branflakes]

I like this one, Dwim. Really caught the feeling of leaving something familar, the sadness and happiness associated with that.

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The original ninja lesbian milk getter.
The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
Life is what you make it.
"I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden
You're going to have to deal with my ego at some point.
Become beautiful on the inside and it will show on the outside.

[*Leo the Lioness*]

having done the cross-country thing, that has just brought back the memory of the many changing radio stations

very well done, i like the effect *G