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January 13th, 2002, 10:16 AM
#1
HB Forum Owner
You thought
You saw it coming.
But you didnt
In the end.
>Silly lil poem<
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Listen!
I can hear them saying now:
"Be careful of what you wish for."
If only I had listened.
But how was I to know?
Death Defying
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January 14th, 2002, 04:21 PM
#2
Inactive Member
i think that u could really go father with this. it does seems like a silly little phrase...u could make it more. post it again if u wish to elaborate on it
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January 15th, 2002, 01:17 AM
#3
HB Forum Owner
Thats what its suppose to be..a silly poem..not something thats an epic in length..
No elaborations..no rhyming words..no stanzas..no prose..Keep it simple I say..
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Listen!
I can hear them saying now:
"Be careful of what you wish for."
If only I had listened.
But how was I to know?
Death Defying
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