rust

[tsilo]

Rust

Your words slice through my toungue
Leaving me in eclipse for years to come
I agonize your solitary beliefs
They withhold daylight into pulpits of fear
You pick up the thorns amidst all the roses
To prick on my numb ears and inject your psychosis
Now everything else is deserted and dry
Like unfinished photographs you would rather not pry
In my system, in my veins
I discarded abhorrent cuts...

In the satin sheets of my blood,
Is where it corrodes to rust.

[machinery]

words words words! yea yea yea! this flowed...this jumped the screen and gnarled! Words!

[Hannibal]

Nice, pretty provacative. Had me imagining, and describing things in my head. I enjoyed. *claps*

[parch]

well...you're getting the third thumbs up right here. last two lines pulled it together... edge, definately a keeper.

___---parch

[tsilo]

thanks every1!eek..i'll just poo some rust...