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March 18th, 2001, 09:20 PM
#1
Inactive Member
Bright chaotic street corners
Putting an end to ill-shaped beginnings
Concrete jungles marked by flashing neon bulbs of life
Don't Walk
Don't Walk
Don't...
Get the fuck out of the way
Alarm sounds as death is flashed upon the wall
Right next to the Panasonic television bought for a cool mill
And you realize this is where you belong
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March 19th, 2001, 02:25 PM
#2
Inactive Member
excellent descriptions...I took to it. I like how you put jazz on the street and "get the fuck out of the way" really emphasizes the feeling in this one. It's raw. Tell me more about this one ....cuz I am still analyzing it.......
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March 19th, 2001, 05:28 PM
#3
Inactive Member
yea yea yea
good good imagery!!
like machinery said,
jazz on the streets, man!
i love it, total beat scene.
do more like it.
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March 20th, 2001, 04:42 AM
#4
Inactive Member
This is something I wrote while in New York City last week. The setting is times square and I'm looking back on a run in I had w/a taxi cab driver.
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March 22nd, 2001, 04:54 PM
#5
HB Forum Owner
i'm getting my first listen in of NIN's "things falling apart" while i read this and i see jungle lizards on walls and i really like it. thinking gecko.
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March 22nd, 2001, 04:57 PM
#6
HB Forum Owner
trevor! you're from hell. it says so next to your name on the left.
how is it?
warm?
i'm from blank space
its great.
but its not warm. it gets cold sometimes ..and those damn mosquitos!
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