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    Inactive Member Trevor Vincent's Avatar
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    Bright chaotic street corners
    Putting an end to ill-shaped beginnings
    Concrete jungles marked by flashing neon bulbs of life
    Don't Walk
    Don't Walk
    Don't...
    Get the fuck out of the way
    Alarm sounds as death is flashed upon the wall
    Right next to the Panasonic television bought for a cool mill
    And you realize this is where you belong

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    excellent descriptions...I took to it. I like how you put jazz on the street and "get the fuck out of the way" really emphasizes the feeling in this one. It's raw. Tell me more about this one ....cuz I am still analyzing it.......

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    yea yea yea
    good good imagery!!
    like machinery said,
    jazz on the streets, man!
    i love it, total beat scene.

    do more like it.

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    Inactive Member Trevor Vincent's Avatar
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    This is something I wrote while in New York City last week. The setting is times square and I'm looking back on a run in I had w/a taxi cab driver.

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    i'm getting my first listen in of NIN's "things falling apart" while i read this and i see jungle lizards on walls and i really like it. thinking gecko.

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    trevor! you're from hell. it says so next to your name on the left.
    how is it?
    warm?
    i'm from blank space
    its great.
    but its not warm. it gets cold sometimes ..and those damn mosquitos!

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