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    another sign has past
    and a month has deteriorated through
    but once again
    i have the bitter taste of you
    for some reason
    my mind, you have crept back in
    my heart has dropped it's sheild
    and turned to porcelain

    and evrything i once knew
    i knew becasue of you
    everything i want to do
    i want becasue of you
    ewverything i feel to be true
    i feel because of you

    my body has lost
    and like your flower, wilts
    and though i felt your flood coming
    i fail to put my heart on stilts
    can you tell
    what you mean to me
    can you feel
    what you are to me

    and evreything i once knew
    i knew because of you
    everything i want to do
    i want because of you
    everything i feel to be true
    i feel because of you

    come to me again
    and get on the same frequncy
    i know your heart
    is plagued with in consistency
    i know you're confused
    and will relate to yourself sometime
    but until you discover yourself
    i, you will not find

    and everything i once knew
    i knew because of you
    everything i want to do
    i want because of you
    everything i feel to be true
    i feel because of you

    i know
    i made the mistake
    i know
    i will stay awake
    i know
    i caused you pain
    i know
    i will wear the stain...
    i know... i know... i know...

    and everything i once knew
    i knew because of you
    everything i want to do
    i want because of you
    everything i feel to be true
    i feel because of you...
    its all becasue of you...
    all because of you...
    its you...

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    I LOVE this!! this has so much feeling in it. and i LOVED the way you used a little rhyme in it.. "my mind you have crept back in/my heart has dropped it's shield/and turned to porcelain"...truly amazing....

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    would could and should be an execellent singer, cuz you got the lyrics right here...along with others you have wrote....so fucking sing....sing it! its a beaut!.


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    liked it man.....it had that little verse scene thrown in there...the rhymes helps it flow nicely, but they arent so predominant whereas you become consumed by them (hopefully you werent intimated by spangly dan in making sure it rhymed, awful wankers) alright then....but anyways...yeah yeah, good good.

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    *giggles and grins* nice work, I did enjoy a good read my fairest of sirs.

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    beautiful. everything fit together. bravo.

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    can't say anything more...damn faceless...it flowed with your poem..hehe

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    yeah
    what they said
    one more vote on the counter for ya

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