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    Inactive Member broken angel's Avatar
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    An emptiness clouds my soul
    My heart grows cold
    I can't stop the sadness
    This life is getting old

    I think of my demise
    My dreams becoming clear
    Nothing lies ahead
    Believing what I fear

    What am I to do?
    No one understands
    I'm all alone with all my thoughts
    So secret are the plans

    I give myself to He who knows
    Free from all the pain
    My last resort for some way out
    My body lies in vain

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    I've noticed a lot of underlying referances to God in your poems, is there a reason for this? or perhaps i'm finding them, when they're not relaly there?
    I liked the peice. Nice work smile

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