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  1. June 19th, 2003, 06:34 AM #1
    Cyalaytr
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    ?Yo-Yo?

    So sorry to disturb you
    But I must make something clear
    I so often want to forget all about you
    My sweet dear?.
    You probably wish the same thing too
    Life is a simple joke
    Worth a single tear
    As I see you in the moon light
    And dream of you by star light
    I cast a spell upon you
    I want to tell you to go to Hell
    But first I want to tell you
    Just how much I love you
    And you only let me down
    Up I go?. down I go?.
    Just like a damn yo-yo.
  2. June 22nd, 2003, 07:23 PM #2
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    i think this one has a lot to say in its brevity,
    but i can't really get the meter... which makes
    me wonder if there is supposed to be any....
    but i coulda sworn... there was some in the opening.
  3. June 26th, 2003, 02:58 AM #3
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    Ever get so mad that all you can muster out is a feel words closest to the meaning in which you intend to impale?
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