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May 18th, 2006, 09:30 PM
#1
Senior Hostboard Member
Why can't I be a water drop -
so the decisions in my life
aren't based on circumstance
as much as chance?
So I wouldn't have the mind
to know my faults
As debilitating as they are
to me.
I could move forward,
with somewhere always to go.
When it's done, and I
have arrived
I could just
dissappear.
what a charming life that
could be.
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May 29th, 2006, 02:12 AM
#2
Inactive Member
I think I really like the longer lines in the beginning. I also like the anonymity and carefree nature that you give to water. I definitely know how you feel tho, no cares would be nice!
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