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    Senior Hostboard Member Hannibal's Avatar
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    Why can't I be a water drop -
    so the decisions in my life
    aren't based on circumstance
    as much as chance?

    So I wouldn't have the mind
    to know my faults
    As debilitating as they are
    to me.

    I could move forward,
    with somewhere always to go.
    When it's done, and I

    have arrived

    I could just
    dissappear.

    what a charming life that
    could be.

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    I think I really like the longer lines in the beginning. I also like the anonymity and carefree nature that you give to water. I definitely know how you feel tho, no cares would be nice!

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