Whoa, looks like you're on a roll DT!
I was personally rooting for Hillary to maintain her flawless win-loss record, but your story was very entertaining and full of heated, hostile action. If there's one thing that could be improved upon further, I'd like the physical (and non-physical) descriptions of the combatants to be even more detailed. A character can never be too life-like!
Keep up the good work!
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